Without an influx of human DNA, the utopian colony on Kipos has eleven generations before it reaches failure. Earth is over ninety light years away. Time is short.
On the over-crowded Earth, many see opportunity in Kipos' need. After medical, intelligence, and physiological testing, Abby and her younger siblings, Jin and Orchid, are offered transportation. Along with 750,000 other strong young immigrants, they leave the safety of their family with the expectation of good jobs and the opportunity for higher education.
This is a repost, Originally posted at ZB's blog of Awesomeness, then it was pointed out to me, I really should be posting it here too. Opps!
So this week I have begun working on my next novel-writing project. (I am also working on Faminelands #3 in the comics arena.) I have finished my outline and started the naming. And I'm going to be moderating some panel discussions at Westercon July 5-8th on Character creation so I am using my blog to organize my thoughts for that.
What is in a name? A good character names has meaning. A good name might denote rank and gender. In a pluralistic society, it defines the character in terms of nationality.
Now call me old-fashioned, but since I speak (American) English as my primary language–as do most of my readers–it is important to me to have names for my characters that the reader can easily say. Even in Faminelands where I might have gone into crazy elvish names, my protagonists are referred by their given nicknames: Lark (Meadowlark) and Orin (Orodherthin).
Now though I am going to talk about how I named Abby from Other Systems. This does not have spoilers. Everything in here is from Chapter 1.
The main character is Abigail even though it is set in 1000 years in the future. Why?
First off it’s easy to say.
Secondly it has a long history. Abigail has been around for millinea. From the Bible, Abigail is Nabal’s wife and becomes the third wife of King David. So it stands to reason, the name will be around in another 1000 years. It has fallen in and out of fashion of course and right now is on an upswing.
Thirdly, it fits the character. I knew she was going to use her intelligence as her primary means of getting through life. She starts the novel at 17. She is a stargazer.
So how did I pick the name? At first I looked at names with the meaning of intelligence, “Akilah, Lassie, Monisha, and Parmena” came up. Akilah: I am not sure how to say, but phonetically it reads A Killa. Parmena sounds too close to Parmesan cheese, Lassie is the name of a dog, so out of my first list “Monisha” was the only name, but it didn’t fit with how I pictured the girl.
The girl’s father is Caucasian with ancestors from Scotland and her mother is Asian with ancestors from China. We also know that her father believes in a monotheism deity while her mother and maternal grandmother believe in an animal zodiac and ancestor worship. She is the first born out of five and well-loved by both her parents especially her father. She is a bit of a daddy’s girl. According to Thinkbabynames.com, the meaning of Abigail is “Father’s joy” or “the Father is rejoicing.” That’s how I picked the given name.
Then I chose the surnames. I wanted to use both maternal and paternal surnames in the naming structure. I decided that during this time period there was two naming systems. Most people who lived in communes have three names: a given name, a paternal family name and a maternal family name.
Once again I looked up specific nationality’s surnames and chose ones that would be easy to say. I decided on a Scottish name “Boyd” and a Chinese name “Lei.” Thus this character became: Abigail Boyd Lei.
Now how does this character, her family and contemporaries refer to her? Pretty much everyone uses the nicknames: Abby or Ab.
How does her boss on Earth refer to her? Miss Boyd Lei. She refers to him by his surname as well.
Finally now that I have a lead character’s name generally I will not name another character with the same first initial. However, the second two most important characters in the novel are Harden and Helen. I used the double H’s purposefully. Harden’s name was chosen first and then his sister.
So anyway that’s how I pick my names, how does everyone else do it?
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R.L. King
May 15, 2012 - 1:14am
I admit it, my guilty pleasure on naming my characters is simplicity. I almost always have the main character's name already picked out before I begin, the rest I make up as I go. I prefer four or five letter names that are one or two syllables, and at the risk of sounding like a lazy writer, I like them easy to type. I like to use names that not only rolls easily off the tongue, but on the keyboard as well.
Of course there are always exceptions, and I have had the most trouble with surnames. I have been known to reach for a phone book and find a quick last name that fits my character. When all else fails, I will give the character a common first name in the introduction and then spend the rest of the story calling him by his last name, such as McCoy.
If you are a new writer, I would suggest naming important side characters after someone you know, that way you can have some underlying attributes already associated with the name. Like the name George. The name invokes (to me at least) a man who is probably tall and skinny, certainly a nerd as a child but now a good man who chomps on cheap cigars as he reads novels on his lunch hour at the factory. Not all George's make it to George Clooney status. On the other hand, you can imagine what a girl named Rosengertle Baumgartnerdale would look like, right?
That's what I do, but I am interested in learning what works for everyone else.
Elizabeth Guizzetti
May 15, 2012 - 10:12am
Do not worry about sounding "lazy writer" or at least know that you have company. You know how many times "Abigail" is written out in Other Systems? Hardly ever. I shorten it to Abby even in the narrative. I saved myself 3 letters at least a thousand times!
I like your suggestion about using the attributes you associate with a name. That's a really good idea.
Candace Knoebel
May 16, 2012 - 9:46am
I agree with both of you. A few of the side characters in my novel were stemmed from people I know and were excited to lend their name. I tried not to spend too much time in over-thinking them. My main character Aurora however, was the name I put time into researching, which means a new dawn. She is the new dawn to an ancient generation of dragons. I shortened her to Rory as well.
A name is a name and it will be what it should be. Same as naming a child. The characters are after all, our children.
On a side note, I am over half-way done with your novel Other Systems, so this is exciting to read while in the process of finishing Harden, Abby, and the rest of the crew's journey. Hope to be done soon so I can give my review. :)
jennifergrey
August 28, 2012 - 12:42am
Hellooooooooooooooooo!
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